di mohon pendapatnya buat lagu saya, Izzy507 - Zydhe

room507 · 02/02/09, 20:14

hi everyone..

minta pendapatnya yah buat track single gw, Izzy507 - Zydhe (unmastered), genre nya trance..
mklum masih newbie jadi blom ngerti soal gmn ng buat lagu yang baik dan benar..
mohon petunjuk yah para senior2 heheh...jgn d marahin yah klo masih ad sound yg kurang enak di dnger

track ny blom d mastering..jadi msih raw bgt..
klo ad yg mw ngasih komntar ato mw bntuin buat nambahin diterima dgn tangan terbuka..hihi

http://media.imeem.com/m/xLMf9CgLsW/aus=false/
http://www.mediafire.com/?2ni42fs91za

Download ny disitu yah...

thnks

izzy507

room507 · 02/02/09, 21:21

ayoo yg udah dngerin jgn lupa d kasih saran yah hehhe,,

still unmastered, jdi klo ad yg mw ngasih sran saya terima sekali ok hehhe
thnks

MC Danz · 02/02/09, 22:27

wuih,.br dgrin previewnya aja dah ktauan sadis lagunya....

ijin DL yah..ntar dicomment

room507 · 03/02/09, 02:34

@ mc danz

hehhe thnks bro,, d tunggu komenny yah, biar gw bs bnerin lagi nih lagu biar tmbh "enk" d dnger
hehhehhe

MC Danz · 03/02/09, 06:07

gokilll,.mantappp...

melodynya keren,.trus nice transition beat2nya

masukan dr gw,.piano yg di around 0.30,mgkn ada yg sdikit kluar pattern bro (just my ear),.
& breath sound yg di around 4.00 pas dimastering freq.nya mgkn lbh bgs di cut...
(cm saran dr seorang newbie nih)

mungkin bs dicoba2 dulu bro... maaf nih kalo sotoy..haha
but overall,.nice sound!!

keep it up yah!!

respect,danny

DJFoo · 03/02/09, 10:02

Udah gw dengerin broo . . .

Laguny mantabbb . . .

Cuman klo bikin intro lebih baik jangan bass doang . . .
Bikin yg agak menggebrak . . .
Tambahin string bagus juga koq . . .

Klo flow udah kerennn . . .
Mixing diperbaiki dikit bro . . .
Udah di sidechain blom . . . ?
Coz suara kickny suka agak kependem klo pas full melody . . .

Klo denger nih lagu gw inget beatny Tiesto yg In My Memories deh . . .

Tapi lagu lo mantabbb . . .
Gw suka melodyny bro . . .
Trace bangeeettttss . . .

Keep produce sob . . .

DJFoo · 03/02/09, 10:03

Oya coba cek punya gw bro . . .

Butuh pendapat . . .

http://ravelex.net/forum/index.php/topic,21102.0.html

angger_dimas · 03/02/09, 11:17

halo room507, nice song and melodies here.. tp kayaknya off keys deh ini.hehehe.. coba di check lg chordnya.

eh engga deng, coba lo check fine tuning di vsti yg lo pake buat bikin bassline, sama lowpass filternya envelope nya di check ya.soalnya agak fals nih..hehehe

phetox86 · 03/02/09, 11:19

KEREN !!

persembahan dikirim langsung dari malaysia nih......NICE bro !!

hee..my opinion cm sdikit bass line aja yg rada ribet2 gt suarany...kicknya aja bro tebelin biar makin uplifting track lo.....btw,GOKIL bro !!

room507 · 03/02/09, 11:21

Quote from: DJFoo on 03/02/09, 10:02
Udah gw dengerin broo . . .

Laguny mantabbb . . .
Cuman klo bikin intro lebih baik jangan bass doang . . .
Bikin yg agak menggebrak . . .
Tambahin string bagus juga koq . . .

Klo flow udah kerennn . . .
Mixing diperbaiki dikit bro . . .
Udah di sidechain blom . . . ?
Coz suara kickny suka agak kependem klo pas full melody . . .

Klo denger nih lagu gw inget beatny Tiesto yg In My Memories deh . . .

Tapi lagu lo mantabbb . . .
Gw suka melodyny bro . . .
Trace bangeeettttss . . .
Keep produce sob . . .

iy sih bro dr kmren gw ulang2 trus kok kykny introny masih kosong, klo buat yg laen2 nya gw blom sm skali apa2 in bro, masih bner2 mntah deh nih blom gw atur apa2 nya hehe, side chain itu apa bro yah??ngatur volume nya gtu yah satu2??hehhehe, mklum bro br pertma kli nyoba producing,,

oh iy satu lagi, mixing ny yg msaih kacau dmn bro??gw g terlalu ngerti nih mixing pas producing, hhahahhaha

mohon petunjuk bro yah,,
sip nnti gw cek lagu lo ok??

thnks bro

room507 · 03/02/09, 11:23

Quote from: angger_dimas on 03/02/09, 11:17
halo room507, nice song and melodies here.. tp kayaknya off keys deh ini.hehehe.. coba di check lg chordnya.

thnks bro,, iy nih msih bnyk yang off keys, mklum bro ini project cb2, masih bnyk yg perlu d btulin,,tlng kasih tau dong bro d bagian mana yg off keys ok??dan gw blom ngatur2 apa 2ny nih dr ni lagu, bner2 masih raw bgt,,pngn mnta ptunjuk dulu br d btulin biar enk d dnger hehhe..klo pas tngh2 lagu pas melody ny gmn bro??klo gw sih ngerasa bnyk yg g enk d dnger pas intro yah??bner g??hehhe

thnks bro

room507 · 03/02/09, 11:25

Quote from: phetox86 on 03/02/09, 11:19
KEREN !!

persembahan dikirim langsung dari malaysia nih......NICE bro !!

hee..my opinion cm sdikit bass line aja yg rada ribet2 gt suarany...kicknya aja bro tebelin biar makin uplifting track lo.....btw,GOKIL bro !!

hahahhaha siapp brooo, masukanny bagus bro, banyak yg bilang gtu, g tertlalu kdengeran yah kicknya??sip de etr d btulin lagi biar tmbh enk d dnger hehhe, tpi klo buat yg bgian tngh2 ny gmn bro??lumayan kan??hehhe

Salam TKI!!!!!! hahha

room507 · 03/02/09, 11:32

Quote from: MC Danz on 03/02/09, 06:07
gokilll,.mantappp...
melodynya keren,.trus nice transition beat2nya
masukan dr gw,.piano yg di around 0.30,mgkn ada yg sdikit kluar pattern bro (just my ear),.
& breath sound yg di around 4.00 pas dimastering freq.nya mgkn lbh bgs di cut...
(cm saran dr seorang newbie nih) mungkin bs dicoba2 dulu bro... maaf nih kalo sotoy..haha
but overall,.nice sound!!

keep it up yah!!

respect,danny

thnks broo,,, siappp nnti cb gw btulin smwa pas mastering,, oh iy klo piano ny itu juga gw nyadar sih ag off keys hahhaa, klo misalkan gw tmbhin sm vocal jelek g yah bro??gw ad rencana pengn mnta bbntuan tmn gw buat nyanyi dikit hehe,,

room507 · 03/02/09, 11:35

@all

smwanya thnks yah buat masukannya..bner2 apa yg drtd malem gw pikirin trnyta d bhs smwa, hahahha,,

thnks yah smwa,,

sukses trus to all...keep on produce...

ayo siapa lagi yang mw ngasih saran....

thnks guys and warmest regards

Izzy 507

room507 · 03/02/09, 11:47

eh engga deng, coba lo check fine tuning di vsti yg lo pake buat bikin bassline, sama lowpass filternya envelope nya di check ya.soalnya agak fals nih..hehehe
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waduh bro g mudeng saya, br d edit yah??ok ok cb nnti gw cek pas abis pulang class..lowpass filter yah bro, ok ok ,, tpi itu nyari dmn yah??gw make ableton bro produce nya,,hihi mhon ptunjuk yah bro, duh uda telat nih gw k class mana blom mndi lagi hahahah

thnks bgt broo...

phetox86 · 03/02/09, 12:00

Quote from: room507 on 03/02/09, 11:25
Quote from: phetox86 on 03/02/09, 11:19
KEREN !!

persembahan dikirim langsung dari malaysia nih......NICE bro !!

hee..my opinion cm sdikit bass line aja yg rada ribet2 gt suarany...kicknya aja bro tebelin biar makin uplifting track lo.....btw,GOKIL bro !!

hahahhaha siapp brooo, masukanny bagus bro, banyak yg bilang gtu, g tertlalu kdengeran yah kicknya??sip de etr d btulin lagi biar tmbh enk d dnger hehhe, tpi klo buat yg bgian tngh2 ny gmn bro??lumayan kan??hehhe

Salam TKI!!!!!! hahha

tengahnya canggih bro..soul lo bgt ditengah

buat kicknya tipis tp panjang gt deh bro...uplifting sound deh jadinya....

yg pnting lo udh maju selangkah lg bro..sukses yah !! salam buat siti nurhaliza. . . .

room507 · 03/02/09, 14:47

Quote from: phetox86 on 03/02/09, 12:00
Quote from: room507 on 03/02/09, 11:25
Quote from: phetox86 on 03/02/09, 11:19
KEREN !!

hihi thnks bgt bro..gw pasti bnerin nti nih lagu ok??
yh siti nurhaliza g pernh jalan brg lagi sm gw bro smnjak d kawinin sm pejabat, klo siti nuraimun mw??huahuahauhauha

sukses juga bro
persembahan dikirim langsung dari malaysia nih......NICE bro !!

hee..my opinion cm sdikit bass line aja yg rada ribet2 gt suarany...kicknya aja bro tebelin biar makin uplifting track lo.....btw,GOKIL bro !!

hahahhaha siapp brooo, masukanny bagus bro, banyak yg bilang gtu, g tertlalu kdengeran yah kicknya??sip de etr d btulin lagi biar tmbh enk d dnger hehhe, tpi klo buat yg bgian tngh2 ny gmn bro??lumayan kan??hehhe

Salam TKI!!!!!! hahha

tengahnya canggih bro..soul lo bgt ditengah buat kicknya tipis tp panjang gt deh bro...uplifting sound deh jadinya....

yg pnting lo udh maju selangkah lg bro..sukses yah !! salam buat siti nurhaliza. . . .

DJFoo · 03/02/09, 19:01

Quote from: room507 on 03/02/09, 11:21

iy sih bro dr kmren gw ulang2 trus kok kykny introny masih kosong, klo buat yg laen2 nya gw blom sm skali apa2 in bro, masih bner2 mntah deh nih blom gw atur apa2 nya hehe, side chain itu apa bro yah??ngatur volume nya gtu yah satu2??hehhehe, mklum bro br pertma kli nyoba producing,,

oh iy satu lagi, mixing ny yg msaih kacau dmn bro??gw g terlalu ngerti nih mixing pas producing, hhahahhaha

mohon petunjuk bro yah,,
sip nnti gw cek lagu lo ok??

thnks bro

Sidechain semacam ducking . . .
Misalny drum disidechain sama bass . . .

Ntar dibuat pas kickny main trus gain bass turun . . .
Jadi semacam ngasih jalan buat kick tuh . . .
Biasany d trance pad sama bassny d sidechain . . (Gw sukany gtu soalny)

Kedengeran kickny agak ngilang pas full melody . . .
Coba di sidechain aj biar kick tetep nge"jedug" gitu . . .

room507 · 03/02/09, 19:45

Quote from: DJFoo on 03/02/09, 19:01
Quote from: room507 on 03/02/09, 11:21

iy sih bro dr kmren gw ulang2 trus kok kykny introny masih kosong, klo buat yg laen2 nya gw blom sm skali apa2 in bro, masih bner2 mntah deh nih blom gw atur apa2 nya hehe, side chain itu apa bro yah??ngatur volume nya gtu yah satu2??hehhehe, mklum bro br pertma kli nyoba producing,,

oh iy satu lagi, mixing ny yg msaih kacau dmn bro??gw g terlalu ngerti nih mixing pas producing, hhahahhaha

mohon petunjuk bro yah,,
sip nnti gw cek lagu lo ok??

thnks bro

Sidechain semacam ducking . . .
Misalny drum disidechain sama bass . . .

Ntar dibuat pas kickny main trus gain bass turun . . .
Jadi semacam ngasih jalan buat kick tuh . . .
Biasany d trance pad sama bassny d sidechain . . (Gw sukany gtu soalny)

Kedengeran kickny agak ngilang pas full melody . . .
Coba di sidechain aj biar kick tetep nge"jedug" gitu . . .

ooo ngerti bro,, hehhe,thnks bro yah , tpi lagi ad msalah nih, ableton gw kan crack an, eh tadi ketahuan jadi ny k lock..uda gtu gw pake mac jadi g bs ngapus registration code ny huh...

nnti klo uda slesai gw post lagi deh bro hasilnya..

mksih yah buat ptunjukny hehheh

Dj R'AngeL · 03/02/09, 19:49

bingung mau comment apa ni gw?
yg lainnya uda pada comment...

hehe..

ayo sob.. gw tunggu klo lagu lo uda di edit lg

..

Freq nya ga beraturan bgt..

overall.. kereen..ajjibb

room507 · 03/02/09, 22:11

Quote from: ¯°·º· Dj R'AngeL ·º·°¯ on 03/02/09, 19:49
bingung mau comment apa ni gw?
yg lainnya uda pada comment...

hehe..

ayo sob.. gw tunggu klo lagu lo uda di edit lg ..

Freq nya ga beraturan bgt..

overall.. kereen..ajjibb

hihih thnks bro,, kan blom d mastering bro..ni gw lagi ngerjain lagi kok, tng aj etr klo udah jadi gw post lagi hehhe,,,

thnks bro

DJFoo · 04/02/09, 09:47

Wuihh bisa ke lock gtu y . . . ?

Moga2 cepet kelar deh bro . . .

room507 · 04/02/09, 13:15

Quote from: DJFoo on 04/02/09, 09:47
Wuihh bisa ke lock gtu y . . . ?

Moga2 cepet kelar deh bro . . .

hihih iy bro maklum dpetny yg bjakan g mmpu bli yg asli hahahhaha,,
sip nnti klo uda kelar gw post lasg disni,,

MC Danz · 09/02/09, 05:02

Quote from: room507 on 03/02/09, 11:32
Quote from: MC Danz on 03/02/09, 06:07
gokilll,.mantappp...
melodynya keren,.trus nice transition beat2nya
masukan dr gw,.piano yg di around 0.30,mgkn ada yg sdikit kluar pattern bro (just my ear),.
& breath sound yg di around 4.00 pas dimastering freq.nya mgkn lbh bgs di cut...
(cm saran dr seorang newbie nih) mungkin bs dicoba2 dulu bro... maaf nih kalo sotoy..haha
but overall,.nice sound!!

keep it up yah!!

respect,danny

thnks broo,,, siappp nnti cb gw btulin smwa pas mastering,, oh iy klo piano ny itu juga gw nyadar sih ag off keys hahhaa, klo misalkan gw tmbhin sm vocal jelek g yah bro??gw ad rencana pengn mnta bbntuan tmn gw buat nyanyi dikit hehe,,

wuih,.seru jg deh kayanya kalo take vocal!! bikin 2 versi aja bro,.dub ama vocal..

di mohon pendapatnya buat lagu saya, Izzy507 - Zydhe

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