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Producing Music => Producing Music - General Talk => Topic started by: esge on 04/10/06, 13:51

Title: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: esge on 04/10/06, 13:51
hi guys, need opinion tentang yg gw buat nih, first single (demo preview, sorry for the poor quality) buat EP pertama gw. Judulnya Hunter. Epic progressive tech/ electro. Teknik pake monophonic tune yg di jalanin bareng2 (dari 1 tone, lama muncul bnyk tone) jadi polyphonic/ more harmonic. Ini gw kasi intip dikit main beat nya (khusus ravelex members). lagunya sih dah jadi 100%, cuma lagi ngejar second tracknya yg masih berhubungan sama track yang ini. klo dah jadi, baru gw send out demos. rencana tar proyek ini gw sbg producer pake nama ...(*beeep)..., nama dari proyek itu sndiri.

comments, critics and suggestions are welcome guys...

link: (updated)
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http://www.mixntune.com/audio/Hunter_(Original_Mix)_Demo2_Preview_128.mp3
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: audie_alb on 05/10/06, 00:04
Keren jo! sayang qualitynya rendah yah jadi gak bisa menikmati track ini seutuhnya (halah)...
Tips, tambahin vocal stab/synth stab dikit asik kynya deh, biar rame aja gitu...

SUKSES!!! Tune Alert!!! New tunes comiiiing!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: A B R I E L on 05/10/06, 01:26
Quote from: audie_alb on 05/10/06, 00:04
Keren jo! sayang qualitynya rendah yah jadi gak bisa menikmati track ini seutuhnya (halah)...
Tips, tambahin vocal stab/synth stab dikit asik kynya deh, biar rame aja gitu...

SUKSES!!! Tune Alert!!! New tunes comiiiing!!!!!!!


om audie kapan nih tracknya di launching... dengerin dooong
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: esge on 05/10/06, 08:12
tar gw naekin dikit bitratenya...
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: esge on 05/10/06, 08:26
Demo #2,
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http://www.mixntune.com/audio/Hunter_(Original_Mix)_Demo2_Preview_128.mp3

comments, critics and suggestions are welcome guys...
.dj-esge
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: Heru Iqbal on 05/10/06, 19:24
Hallo Dj-esge..

Salam kenal sebelumnya. Aku udah denger niih lagu Demonya dari Link yang anda berikan.
Pendapat aku sih sederhana aja :

Tapi Percaya deh, jika anda mau terus kembangkan diri dan banyak mencari warna musik yang spesifik, saya yakin sekali kelak anda akan menjadi salah satu orang terhebat dibidang Electronic Dance Music Indonesia.

Salam,


Heru Iqbal
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: 1945MF on 06/10/06, 01:37
@Esge.. ur track is good but just need more layer and rools inside.. nd a voice of woman there.. just a bit input.. keep the good work!!
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: esge on 06/10/06, 10:07
heru iqbal, thx for da input.
soal kurang enerjik, gw jg lom gitu paham sih bro, tar gw ulik lagi,
klo soal variasi, ide lagunya emang make cuma pake 1 instrument, yang di layering dari segi efek dan oktaf
soal jiwa.. hehe... tar saya sembahyang dulu.
once again, thx for da input, gw jg masih ulik2 lagi biar kemarenan ngerasa udah 100%.

1945MF, klo layer gw rasa sih udah cukup, tinggal tahap ngembangin efek2 sama ambience nya nih yg masih aga2 tuing2 di pala, but the idea is electro house and to keep the song se-simple mungkin.

vox trax, soal vox, is it ok to put vox not from my own recordings? (from cd loops, etc)
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: 1945MF on 06/10/06, 15:21
Layer yg gue maksud is a detail like pad's,sweeping,rools..
Voice its oke kok.. as long u not release them joo.
full support !! ;-)
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: esge on 06/10/06, 16:23
ic.. thx pa. gw ulik2 lagi skalian ngembangin ke lagu2 baru.
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: hogi on 06/10/06, 18:31
Menurut saya soundnya sudah bagus-bagus, kalau saran saya justru jangan kebanyakan vocal dan gitu2. Keep it minimal, coba mungkin dari suara yang ada dikembangin misalnya synthnya buka tutup cutoff dan apalah controlsnya sesuai arrangement dan coba mungkin notes di layer dengan sound lain jadi bisa lebih nyanyi partsnya. terus juga untuk beats mungkin coba dikasih kehidupan dengan per sound nya di bus efx mungkin jadi ada bagian yang crashnya atau snare nya di delay atau direverb ...
Hmmmm... apalagi ya... i think that's all from me .... good stuff bro, happy producing ...

HOGI
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: F E R R E on 06/10/06, 19:38
didonlot dulu ni bro...comments soon!
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: Lncx on 17/10/06, 11:45
bro.. webnya baru maintenance yah...
donload dulu deh.. hheuhe...
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: Lncx on 17/10/06, 12:06
dah donload neh... n.... KEREN bro.... cuma sayang.. lagi pas bagus2nya dah selese.. hauhaueu... mungkin klo ada versi lengkapnya boleh juga.. halaahh.....

keep da good work ;)
Title: Re: Need Opinions for my First Tech/Electro Track
Post by: X i e t a on 17/10/06, 12:19
nice kok...tapi bener juga kata pak heru iqbal .... kurang enerjik yah rasa2nya....
tapi keren kok ..... good luck for next project yah sob ... mau full version donk ....  :)
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